Character sheet review thread

[Gerontis]

Post your character sheets here. Keep in mind that to make it accepted, it will need to have two acceptances of a GM. However, when a GM requests an edit, that goes above the acceptance. Once accepted, a GM will likely move your post. Else ask one of the GM's to move your accepted post.

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Dumping this here for now. Will finsish later, have to close the computer atm, power's going out any second.





Name:
Jinyaru Sanosuke
Nickname/Alias:
Steaming Chef Jin
The Fourth Raikage
Gender:
Male
Age and date of birth:
32, May 4th
Age Appearance:
Early 30's
Sexuality:
Straight

Parents:
Haseo Sanosuke and Vivi Sanosuke.

Length and build
187 CM, muscularly athletic.
Weight
81 kg.
Favorite weather and season
Sunny, Summer.




Village:
Kumogakure
Birthplace:
Land of Lightning
Organization:
Kumogakure military forces.

Clan/Bloodline:
Sanosuke

Rank:
Kage / Head Of State.
Chakra Nature:
Fire, Water - Steam.
"Cooking Release"



Appearance:
Jinyaru usually wears a weighted black Tank top with black slacks and ninja tabi with longer shaft, reaching all the way up his shins.
Over it he usually wears a kimono, rarely seen in his flack jacket.
In a serious fight, he usually removes the kimono and the heavy tank top.



Personality:

Jinyaru is a charismatic man. He makes people feel special by looking at them, every word he speaks is soothing.
You know with him around, you'll be safe.
He's a man who when he walks into a room he instantly sends an aura of tranquility and respect.
He's diplomatic and very kind. He spends a lot of time thinking. Considering his actions.
His life's been filled with tragedy, and it's formed him to become a somewhat more serious soul.
However, he is still cheerful and will play jokes and pranks on his fellow shinobi.

In his youth, he was a wild one. A charmer who's goal was to make a name for himself as a warrior, and to leave no girl unturned.
He was a rowdy one in his youth, something he's somewhat grown out of, but he's still young at heart.




History:
Born in Kumogakure. His father the brother of a very prominent and powerful Shinobi. His mother was a chef, owning her own restaurant.
His father, despite not being as strong as his older brother, Waki, was still a fairly powerful shinobi, being a special-jounin at the time of Jinyaru's birth.
Jinyaru is the older of two brothers, his younger brother was 1 year younger and named Hiroshi.

Jinyaru was from a very young age a prominent shinobi. Learning academy jutsu at the age of four. He was a prodigy, and everyone saw it.
He had a natural grasp for chakra control and ninjutsu in general.
At the age of nine he graduated from the academy, already knowing several techniques way beyond his years.
Jinyaru's teenage years were spent as a chunnin, upon becoming one at the age of 12, his brother shortly behind him in terms of skill.
In his teenage years Jinyaru was infamous in the village as a troublemaker. His superiors disciplined him, but it never took effect.
People however couldn't be too hard on him, as he was a very promising rising star of the hidden cloud, and so was his younger brother, Hiroshi.


The war came, Jinyaru was in his late teens when the war started all out.
Still a boy, and not a man, he had however taken up his passion for cooking, and was known as a excellent chef.
Something he always used to it's full extend whenever ladies were around.

The war changed Jinyaru, it came with a promotion to Jounin, but it left him with memories of horror that he wished he could forget.
His brother died in the war. His squad got assaulted in the land of grass, after a joint mission between the Sanosuke brothers. It was Kiri shinobi that climbed the life of Hiroshi.
Or so Jinyaru thought.


Jinyaru's life progressed as one would've suspected. He was a star child. He had a run with the ANBU before finally deciding on becoming a sensei. He had quite a few students, all of them becoming pretty amazing shinobi. But there was one trio that stuck out more than all others. Their names?
Kai, Takeshi and Mitsuko. One of them a wind-user, second a lightning user, and the third a storm user.
They were Jinyaru's pupils for three years.

He taught them teamwork, passion and teamwork, among the countless other teachings the chef taught his students.
The war with Suna came, and Jinyaru was choosen by Genmyo to lead a portion of the army. He met the Jun brothers during this time, both of them being promising shinobi. Reminding him of himself in his youth.
The war was over as quickly as it started, but that was just the start of how things were gonna go sour.
Mitsuko became a chunnin a year after the other two, whom had been in his team longest. Takeshi and Kai's rivalry bloomed. They were the fiercest of rivals on the battlefield, but the best of friends away from battle. The three had a combination Jinyaru rarely saw, a sense of Teamwork that still, to this day, would make him proud.

If it didn't hurt so much to think about.

A certain mission turned his world back for the worse. A mission with his own team, and the team of his best friend. Team Koki.
They were sent out, the eight of them, to find a missing ninja from the Mist village, a former member of the seven swordsmen.
Team Jinyaru and Team Koki found the swordman, however, much to their dismay, the swordman had a entourage himself. The swordsman's pupils assaulted and split up the students of the two Jounin, as the latter handled the swordsman himself.

The fight raged on, and as the battle between the two friends and the swordsman grew longer, Jinyaru began noticing certain things. Things he hadn't seen in years.
Then the swordsman dropped the charade. Telling Jinyaru about whom he truly was. The swordsman was Hiroshi, Jinyaru's brother, whom he thought had died so many years ago, during the shinobi war. Hiroshi asked Jinyaru to join him. To leave Kumogakure. The two of them would build their own village. Their own place where shinobi could be who they wanted to be. Just like they always talked about when they were younger.


Jinyaru will never admit it, but he was tempted. Far more tempted than anyone else can understand. But still, he declined. His rejection made his little brother furious, and the swordsman charged, using the giagantic executioners knife at Jinyaru. Aiming to decapitate him.

However, he was stopped right in front of Jinyaru, by the chef's own students. Kai and Takeshi killed Jinyaru's brother, to protect their sensei.
Koki and Jin were the only ones who knew that happened that day, who the swordsman truly was, but Jinyaru decided that the man he saw that day wasn't his brother. It was a shell of the loving young man he once knew. However, that day wasn't over just yet. They'd get back to the village, and Jinyaru would get called away.

Called away by a mysterious letter, by two people in masks. Calling themselves Dragon & Lotus. They told Jinyaru about a dark secret. The Raikage was a fraud. A fake. The real Genmyou had been killed months ago. Jinyaru could not prove it yet. So he was forced to wage a secret war against the fake.
And so he did. It took him four months, and the loss of his best friend, Koki, at the hands of the imposter Raikage.

But he finally could prove it. Sending his students to guard the elders, he would take out the imposter.
Naomi Hanamoto and Jinyaru fought that day. It all ending with Jinyaru slicing her throat open after a long and tiresome fight.

But that day wasn't over yet, either. Jinyaru doesn't know the details, but somehow, Takeshi found out about one of Jin's old ANBU ops. The one that left Takesi an orphan. Something Jinyaru never had the stomach to tell Takeshi about.

All Jin knew was that Kai had gone after Takeshi, that Takeshi had died in a battle between the two.
However, the situation got worse, as he learnt of the massacre that had been done by his student, Kai had massacred an entire part of the academy, one third of all the academy students in the village were murdered by Jinyaru's own student. A young man Jin had loved like a son.

Jin wanted to find him. But he couldn't. He had to lead the village now. He was crowned Raikage, and he'd have to bear that burden, weather he liked it or not.




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Special Traits
(Place unique traits like "High Chakra levels" or "multiple limbs" here. If it isn't here it won't be counted, even if you come from the Uzumaki clan, high chakra won't be accepted unless here.)


Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai:
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Name: Jurou Mori
Nickname/Alias: The Mist’s Black Deluge
Gender: Male
Age: 34
Age Appearance: 34
Sexuality: Gay

Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: N/A

Clan/Bloodline: N/A

Rank: Jounin

Chakra Nature: Suiton, Inton

Appearance: Jurou is a tall, very physically fit man with short blonde hair which he wears combed backwards. He wears his forehead protector on a bandanna which wraps around his head just over his eyes, covering his eyebrows and keeping his combed hair in place. He has three tattoos forming the shape of an upside down pyramid under each eye, and has a long, sharp chin. For clothing, Jurou will typically wear a customized version of the village’s ANBU slate gray flak jacket, sleeveless with multiple pockets and a zipper in the front which he keeps unzipped. His torso is bare underneath, and he wears a pair of long, padded black pants.

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Personality: Jurou is a rather twisted man. In everyday life, he can be quite outgoing, often enjoying going out to drink or hanging out with friends; always having something to say. He is known and respected around the village, and is often said to take things at his own tempo while rarely getting worried or stressed out about anything. On the field, however, he has a reputation for violence and ferocity that even his former squadmates, no saints themselves, have said to find unsettling in the past. He destroys or slaughters his targets without hesitation, seeming to take a sick thrill in the art that has led to him being considered a bit of a loose cannon. He can be somewhat selfish at times and will often do things that benefit or interest him even if it’s to the detriment of others. On the surface, he can appear to care little for the wellbeing and dignity of others and often comes off as a jerk as a result.

This personality is said to extend to his students as well, being very hard on those assigned to learn under him by giving them vigorous training schedules and straining challenges that even adults would have trouble completing. Some believe this is because he simply dislikes having to supervise children, though he himself states that he is only trying to forge them into proper shinobi.

History: Jurou was born in Kirigakure to a shinobi father and a working mother. Growing up, he displayed an interest in becoming a shinobi and was trained by his father. He graduated the academy at the age of 12 and became a chuunin at 16.

In wartimes, Jurou was promoted to Specialized Jounin and became a member of the Kirigakure Naval Destruction Corps, a division of shinobi tasked with tracking down and annihilating enemy vessels. It was during this time that he truly developed into the strong shinobi he is today; not all, or even necessarily the majority of the people on the ships they sank were combatants in the war but they continued to do it over and over again until they lost all remorse. Over their career, the eight man squad to which he belonged continued to perform well until they eventually became well known and feared as the ‘Reapers of the Sea’ with more than a hundred ships sent to a watery grave by their actions alone. The Reapers were still mere shinobi, however, and over time its great legacy gradually fell apart. Three of its members were killed during a major conflict with an elite squadron of Konohagakure nin, a fourth fell ill with a rare disease from a foreign continent contracted on a supply ship and had to return home before eventually retiring as a shinobi, while a fifth was wounded while onboard an enemy ship and rendered unable to escape as the vessel sank. Their replacements were overshadowed in comparison to the original Reapers and the group slowly faded from prominence until eventually being broken up.

Despite this, however, Jurou’s own career flourished, becoming a full jounin at 22 as he developed and mastered a special ninjutsu known as Sanzu no kawa, or ‘Black River’ while still with the original Reapers and earning him respect in his own right. After the group disbanded he took in two genin squads throughout his career, though neither lasted more than a month; giving him a notorious reputation as a brutal sensei as four of the genin quickly requested transfers and two ending up quitting their careers as shinobi altogether. He continued serving Kirigakure in the years since the war, and participated a little in the various power struggles though he never appeared to have much interest in who won so long as he could continue serving the village as he had been.
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Weapons/Items:

Name of Weapon or Item: Twin harpoons
Description: A pair of long, steel whaling harpoons custom built for combat usage. Jurou is very skilled with them, capable of using them like spears which with his great physical strength alone he can easily pierce through thick stone with even when thrown from a long distance. They can also be wielded in close combat quite effectively. The ends of the spears are connected to long reels of wire on his belt with mechanisms which can be activated to quickly retract them after being thrown. Modified exploding tags, designed to detonate when thrown with significant force by him rather than when burnt, can be hidden along the shaft in order to create powerful explosions when thrown from a distance. Normally when needing them, Jurou keeps these strapped on the back of his flak jacket in an X-shaped position for convenient usage.

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Name of Weapon or Item: Trench Knives
Description: Various large combat knives which Jurou carries on his person, finding them to be very effective weapons in close combat as well as in mid-range when thrown.

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Skills/Abilities

• Well Honed Physical Abilities, Mainly In Strength and Endurance
  
• Great Skill in Ninjutsu
• A very good shot even at long distances, especially with harpoons
• Good Swimmer
• Poor Chakra Control
• Below Average Agility for a Jounin
• Little to No Proficiency in Genjutsu
• Sanzu no kawa: Also called Black River, this is a complex, hidden style developed by Jurou himself which involves lacing dark Yin-Natured chakra into the water created by his Water Release jutsu to create a form of black water with unique properties. This water behaves like normal Water Release, except is far denser, is resistant to changing states, and is able to flow towards and compress itself around released chakra. The stronger and closer the chakra being released, the more powerfully the water will be pulled towards it as if by gravitational force. The water will flow towards an enemy that is releasing and/or manipulating chakra as if in order to use a jutsu and compress around them while absorbing it. The more black water there is the more chakra it can absorb from the target; which is also its biggest weakness. An amount of black water can be forcibly evaporated by feeding it more chakra then it can withstand, which is approximately three times the chakra used to produce it. The black water’s tracing effects can also be countered by not using chakra.

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Special Traits

• High Chakra Levels
• Sharp Eyesight allowing him to distinguish targets over long distances.

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Jutsu:

• Water Clone Technique
• Hiding in Water Technique
• Gunshot
• Great Waterfall Technique
• Rampaging Water
• Water Shark Bullet
• Great Water Shark Bullet

Name of Technique: Black River: Gunshot
Type of Jutsu: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Nature Type: Suiton
Handseals: Tiger
Description: A simple use of the normal Water Release: Gunshot, except using Jurou’s signature black water instead. The black water’s increased density gives the gunshot a much greater punch while also allowing it to actively change directions to seek out and follow a chakra-using target.
Weakness: Its tracing abilities can be muddled when the chakra it is pursuing splits up such as through a clone technique, making it unsure of what to follow.

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Name of Technique: Black River: Violent Serpent
Type of Jutsu: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Nature Type: Suiton
Handseals: 8
Description: The user creates a massive, ten meter long serpent out of black water with that he can control to attack a target. The serpent can deal damage by trapping its target inside its mouth and compressing the black water it is comprised of in order to crush them.
Weakness: Must be actively controlled, dividing his attention.

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Name of Technique: Black River: Colliding Wave
Type of Jutsu: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Nature Type: Suiton
Handseals: 12
Description: The user smashes his hand on the ground and generates a massive amount of black water that surges forward like a large, destructive wave. The more chakra put into this technique, the more water can be generated. If it doesn’t wash away, the black water will settle into a large pool of varying size. Any chakra used within this pool will cause the black water to come up and compress itself around it.
Weakness: Requires a large amount of chakra. The water created by this technique will flow towards anyone who uses chakra after it has settled, including him.

Summons

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Name: Umikyojin
Species: Whale
Age: 30+
Size: Large
Unique Traits:

• Can stay underwater for hours at a time
• Has a large mouth which up to a dozen people can fit and travel inside
• Difficult to track while submerged
• Its thick skin and large body make it difficult to injure

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Jutsu: None
History: Umikyojin is a son of a famous whale, Wadatsumi, which served Kirigakure for generations before being killed in the First Shinobi World War. Towards the end of the war, after he had been become captain of the Reapers Group, Jurou chose to have Umikyojin become the squad’s transporter and has worked alongside it ever since. Although he can summon the whale, usually he simply has it follow along when he thinks he might need its support.

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[Fieryfly]

@maria: I would like you to fix your links to your jutsu.

@dust: About the Sanzu no Kawa (Nice name btw, well chosen) I would like to know how many chakra the black water can absorb. And how much chakra it costs Jurou to create black water.

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I've made the requested changes to Mori's profile. Wasn't sure how to implement a unit of measurement for chakra, but hopefully it's workable now.

[lostkoyomancer]

Name
Kenta Ishiyama
Nickname/Alias
White lion (Among his clan)
Gender
Male
Age
23
Age Appearance
21
Sexuality:
Heterosexual

Village:
Amegakure
Birthplace:
Sunagakure
Organization:
Amegakure
Ishiyama

Clan/Bloodline:
Ishiyama
Rank:
Amekage assistant
Chakra Nature:
Wind (Affinity) and Earth
Appearance:
Kenta height is normal for his age, maybe a tad small. His lower face cannot be seen due to the facemask he wears. His eyecolour is bright green, and he has lighter skin than most in his clan. He has jet black hair that rarely falls in his face unless wet, also he is quite a skinny man, bits of muscle here and their but not much meat.

Personality:
Kenta is the type of person to keep to himself, he speaks when spoken to unless something intrigues hims. He is obedient and loyal towards his clan, not just his clam but Isamu who he looks up to with pride. Silent and calm in most situations but never afraid to suggest an opinion, this however has to be done in private as he tends to trust nobody. Depending on how serious the situation is to him, Kenta can be very stubborn, and if troubled can become quite dangerous.

History:
As young boy Kenta was raised strict and attended to the academy in Sunagakure, he was lucky to graduate at an early age. The reason they call him lucky is because that was when Ishiyama began to move to a different country.
He trained his taijutsu speed rather than strength as he believed being the first one to strike could end anything. He rose quickly training with older members of the clan who were more experienced than him, sparring with them and asking ways to improve. Ninjutsu came natural to him, though he always hated it and rarely used it unless in a dire situation or trying to enhance it.

At the age of 16 Kenta began his first contract, this would lead him into the world of risks, but he showed no regret, and stood prepared. Contracts came and Kenta completed them, his dedication to his clan and desire of becoming The Lion" consumed him, all he could think about of killing Isamu and becoming the new leader. One night on a mission Kenta was on his way to the target accompanied by his comrade. Kenta being still young and foolish back then would fall into conversation with his comrade, this got to a point where Kenta exposed his true desire.

After the assassination complete, and the journey back home, 5 days later Kenta was dragged out of his bed and throw down on the ground in front of Isamu. The man questioned him of his desires, Kenta could not lie to his leader, he was too obedient, so he told him his own desires and for that he went under a cruel punishment that has forced him to wear the facemask and never remove it to anyone, unless asked by Isamu. It was this punishment the man realized he could no longer anyone but himself, remembering how he told his comrade his desires.

2 years of unfailed assignments, Kenta still wanted to push himself, he took on a big contract that stated he must kill a Kenjutsu expert located in Water Country. Believing he was one step closer to his goal, he set out.


When he came in contact with Kenjutsu expert, the expert left Kenta half dead, the pride and confident drained from him aswell as his energy. Being able to play dead so well the Kenjutsu master was convinced that he had killed the man who tried kill him, he turned his back, then turned to Kenta. Drawing out a knife, he wanted to make sure Kenta was dead, and would attempt to slit his throat. Just about to pull his facemask down, the man would be inpaled by a jagged pillar of earth, Kenta was grateful that day for his comrades, however that would be the only time he showed gratefulness for seeing them.

They returned to estate laying the injured Kenta in front of Isamu. They expected Isamu to punish him there and then, but he didnt. Isamu rose from his throne, and walked to Kenta, then placed his own hand on the young man's shoulder. He finished off with a kneel, and then pounded his chest with his fist. "Arise Kenta Ishiyama, you are a man with high expectations, yet the way tackle your desires are foolish, yet entertaining. Watching you come so far and remain loyal, watching your stainless success become drenched in your own blood of failure, it has opened your eyes no? There can only be one Lion Kenta Ishiyama. But do not worry boy, you still have a chance for, I Isamu pass down to you Kenta ,some of my knowledge." And so it began.

His defeat that almost cost him his life, became the glasses that made him see his flaws. He managed to pick up Kenjutsu, and developed a habit of using lighter weapons, this lead him to using a tanto. Isamu helped him progress in his Kenjutsu and hand to hand combat skills. As sign of graduation he gave him his lion Mokoto, this would of been Kenta's first summoning as he believed that using summonings were signs of weakness.

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Weapons/Items:
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Name of Weapon or Item:
Tanto
Description:
Just a normal Tanto.
Appearance:
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Name of Weapon or Item:
Average ninja tools
Description:
Your average ninja tools.

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Skills/Abilities
* Good with Kenjutsu/Ninjutsu/Taijutsu.
* Excels in wind release techniques.
* Quick reflexes/ quick on the feet
He is good with stealth but there is room for improvement.
*Silent Killing technique (not mastered fully but able to play it well)
* Poor endurance.
* Bad with kunais and shurikens.
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Special Traits
* Amazing hearing (Due to years of clan training)
* Observant
* Calm

* Stubborn
* Prideful

Kekkei Genkai/Clan:
Ishiyama

Jutsu:



*Knows and is capable of using every Academy jutsu.

Wind Release :
naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Re...ough Technique
Wind Release : Violent Wind Palm Technique.
Wind Release : Air Bullets Technique
naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Dust_Wi...Wind Technique
naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Vacuum_...word Technique
naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Re...ream Technique


Earth Release :
Earth Release : Underground Projection Fish Technique
Earth Clone Technique
Earth Release : Rock Pillar Prison Technique
Earth Release Armour Technique
Hidden Among Rocks Technique.
Earth Release : Mudslide Technique

Name of Technique:
Wind Release :Wind coating Technique
Type of Jutsu:
Kenjutsu, ninjutsu, chakra flow
Rank:
C
Range:
User's weapon
Nature Type:
Weapon
Handseals:
N/A
Description:
Kenta coats his tanto in wind natured chakra slightly extending the reach of the blade. The blade is more sharper and more lighter easier for slicing through material.
Weakness:
Projectiles are very annoying to this technique. Larger blades such as Katana's are difficult to combat due to length and weight. It is also visible.

Name of Technique:
Earth Release : Earth Coating Technique
Type of Jutsu:
Kenjutsu, ninjutsu, chakra flow
Rank:
C
Range:
User's weapon
Nature Type:
Earth
Handseals:
N/a
Description:
Kenta coats his tanto in earth nature chakra, thus making it stronger and more endurable.
Weakness:
It is visible, tanto strikes are slower due to the weight. Lightning and Wind are able to slice through the reinforced earth coating.

Summons




Name:
Mokoto
Species:
Lion
Age:
65
Size:
Medium(size of a normal lion)
Traits
*Cooperates well with Kenta.
*Loyal and obedient.
*Brave to the point it fears nothing.
*Understands human tongue though cannot speak it
Jutsu:
Water Technique : Waterfall Basin Technique.
Hidden Mist Technique
History:
This lion is rumoured to be Mokoto in spirit. After his passing it was said that his spirit had so much fire that it could never be extinguished. He was formed into a lion with some features, such as his white skin being white fur, and water chakra nature. But this is just a rumour. (I will fix tomorrow)

[Fieryfly]

@koyo: Could you fix the links in your sheet, most of the canon techniques are not properly linked

[j8cob]

Because I had to completely rebuild him from scratch, there are gonna be some differences from now and his original accepted sheet. Therefore, I'm posting here to get him re-accepted. Seriously, this was a major pain the ass guys. Gonna just note that I hate, hate rebuilding sheets. Anyways...

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Name:
Nori Osamu
Nickname/Alias:
None yet...
Gender:
Male
Age and date of birth:
23; 14th of July
Age Appearance:
Young adult, early 20's
Sexuality:
Hetero

Parents:
Hachiro and Kitsune Osamu
Length and build
1.85m; lean, though there is a faint hint of muscle
Weight
74kg
Favorite weather and season
Pure sunshine; Summer



Village:
Kumogakure
Birthplace:
Osamu Village
Organization:
N/A

Clan/Bloodline:
Osamu Clan -
A clan known for its crazy and ancient beliefs, as well as their unique and powerful Kekkai Genkai. Though there are no known shinobi from the clan for the past hundred years, aside from Nori, they are left alone in the north of the Land of Lightning.

Rank:
Jonin

Chakra Nature:
Lunar and Solar (see KG)



Appearance:





Personality:
For a man that was forcibly removed from his family at a young age and forced to raise himself, he turned out quite well. Nori is a calm individual. Calm is just the best word to describe him. His intelligence and general disposition keeps him collected even in tense situations. Generally respectful and to the point, Nori can occasionally get lippy when excited in one way or another. While he keeps his opinions to himself for the most part, he won't hold back if he sees that profit can actually come from speaking his mind. Sharp and cunning, he has a knack for noticing little details. It is difficult to get anything past him. For his rather relaxed and calm demeanor, Nori can be pushed to excitement in extreme situations or when his abilities are pushed to the limit. Only then does he get the true rush of battle, and he can shed his calmness at that point for something a bit more... bloodthirsty.




History:
Born to the Osamu clan, Nori was always different. While his entire family, and everyone around him for that matter, was rigid in their archaic beliefs and rituals, Nori was curious about many things. One such thing was his Kekkai Genkai, the Tenjin. However, all the adults were quiet and even seemed to make the subject taboo. It wasn't until his great grandfather, the oldest member of the Osamu and the only member who was alive the last time there were any Osamu shinobi, decided to show him a secret. Underneath his house was a hidden room filled with ancient scrolls, all of them detailing various techniques and history of Tenjin. At five years old, Nori began expanding his knowledge on the subject.

He wasn't caught until he was nine years old. By this point, he had a better mastery over his abilities than anyone else had in over a hundred years. But due to the archaic beliefs about Tenjin, Nori was branded a heretic. The scrolls were confiscated and planned to be burned, and Nori was expelled from the clan. Even his own mother and father, both devout followers of Osamu beliefs, did nothing to stop his expulsion. The young Nori was at first discouraged and alone. But something possessed him to take control. With passion in his heart, Nori snuck back into the Osamu Village and stole as many scrolls he hadn't memorized yet as he could. Like a bandit, he made off into the night.

Alone in the cold, Nori didn't make his way to Kumogakure for several months. And until he arrived, he didn't even know it existed. His knowledge of the world outside the Osamu Village was rather limited, but he was elated that there were other people like him: shinobi. He immediately enlisted in the Ninja Academy, but a problem was quickly encountered. Nobody there had seen anything like him, and his Tenjin prevented him from performing the basic techniques. However, his skill with his Kekkai Genkai and overall shinobi skills let him slide by. All the time he attended the Academy, he lived by himself and supported himself with various odd jobs around Kumogakure. At first it was difficult, as people would automatically judge him as crazy upon finding out his surname. But once he stopped giving it to people, things became easier.

A genin at the ripe age of eleven, Nori had big goals. By now, he determined that he wanted to achieve the levels of greatness and power that his Kekkai Genkai could afford him. He easily outclassed other students of his age, and became chuunin on his twelfth birthday. However, at this point, the Raikage assigned Nori to a special team. It only consisted of himself and a sensei, who was originally an ANBU but was reassigned to Nori. Though Nori was skilled, very skilled, his new sensei refused to have him promoted to jonin. He had to truly prove his worth.

It wasn't until Nori was nineteen that he finally was promoted. But only after he fought his sensei in battle. Once Nori proved his worth, the Raikage promoted him with haste. To this day, Nori is unsure why he was treated in such a way, what with having his own sensei and having his promotion put off, but he holds the time dear. He hated it as a teenager, but now he sees the value of the experience. After several solo stints, Nori began spending most of his time practicing his skills and his Tenjin. But he was soon assigned to be a sensei himself. Though his team has had drastic changes to its lineup, Nori continues in his effort, seeing the job as being a way to test and improve his leadership and even social abilities.

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Weapons/Items:
Standard Shinobi Tools


Skills/Abilities
Nori is incredibly intelligent and his skills are quite diverse. He is a jack of all trades, but to say he's a master of none is a lie. And his ability to analyze foes and the situation make him deadly combined with his diversity and ability to adapt.



Special Traits
As granted by his Tenjin, Nori has nearly unlimited chakra. For his incredible chakra, see his KG. On top of this, Nori is above average in his physical prowess. Though there are many that surpass him, that doesn't mean his punches don't hurt and he can't outrun many others. His handseal speed has become incredible, with one of the fastest speeds out there to allow him to maximize his jutsu utilization.


Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Tenjin
Clan:
Osamu
Description:
One of the most unique Kekkai Genkai known to man. Found only in those of the Osamu clan, it entirely restructures the chakra system. Not only is the system different, there are two chakra systems. Both systems are quite massive, and their chakra is ridiculously powerful (having no natural checks or counters and adverse effects on the enemy if the chakra is stolen). One system draws in power from the sun, and therefore is constantly recharging throughout the day. This chakra, solar chakra, has an orange appearance to it. The other system draws power from the moon, and is thus labeled lunar chakra. This has a faint violet color. Each system has its own unique set of techniques impossible to perform without the required chakra, and each system can only be used during the corresponding time of day. During the opposite time of day the other system is totally locked out, being unable to either draw in chakra or access what is currently there. This chakra is unique to the Osamu and thus easily distinguishable. It can be noted that during an eclipse, both chakra reserves are activated at the same time. The rush of chakra and power is said to give the Osamu god-like abilities, though whether that is ancient myth or not is yet to be tested...



Jutsu:

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None. He has literally no "typical" jutsu, as his chakra will not allow him to perform the required techniques. No yin or yang, so yeah.

Custom Jutsu
Solar

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Name of Technique:
Sun Style: Boost
Type of Jutsu:
Ninjutsu
Rank:
A
Range:
Self
Nature Type:
Solar
Handseals:
5
Description:
Nori is wrapped in a coat of orange solar chakra. In this state, his speed is dramatically increased. To the point that even seeing him can be difficult, let alone keeping proper track of him. The speed boost also affects his handseal speed and his reflexes, as well as general speed. Like this, he is one of the fastest in the world.
Weakness:
As awesome as his speed is, it has a serious drawback: no protection from his own speed. Continued use will leave Nori lightheaded, and pushing it can cause him to black out. Though he has trained to push his limits quite far, they are still there.

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Name of Technique:
Sun Style: Blinding
Type of Jutsu:
Genjutsu
Rank:
B
Range:
Medium
Nature Type:
Solar
Handseals:
3
Description:
Nori performs the handseals and claps his hands. Anyone looking at him will be blinded by a brilliant flash of light. This will rob anyone of their vision for thirty to ninety seconds. Due to the nature of it, one cannot be snapped out of it by any Genjutsu prevention measures. Rather, they must wait for it to wear off.
Weakness:
As the technique wears off, vision slowly fades back in. So blindness is reduced over time rather than just suddenly regaining vision. As well, if nobody is looking on the hand clap, nobody will be affected.

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Name of Technique:
Sun Style: Shining
Type of Jutsu:
Genjutsu
Rank:
C
Range:
Medium
Nature Type:
Solar
Handseals:
3
Description:
Nori infuses solar chakra into projectile weapons such as shuriken and throws them. The chakra makes them shine bright. Incredibly bright. In fact, looking at them is difficult and pinpointing their exact location is equally challenging. One at a time, the difference isn't dangerous, but when performed on many shuriken all thrown at once, dodging them all suddenly becomes incredibly difficult.
Weakness:
Contact with anything will make them lose their shining power. Though the affected weapons will be difficult to deal with, they are not impossible. One with a keen eye will be able to keep track.

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Name of Technique:
Sun Style: Block
Type of Jutsu:
Ninjutsu
Rank:
A
Range:
Close
Nature Type:
Solar
Handseals:
5
Description:
Nori creates a temporary wall of his own chakra and extends it from his body. The solar chakra blocks incoming attacks with ease, only giving way to the more powerful techniques. The wall only lasts for a few seconds, but can be adjusted while it is still active. The maximum range the chakra can extend from Nori is only two meters, so it is only really good for protecting himself. The size is also adjustable, but more size requires more chakra.
Weakness:
Powerful techniques can break through the chakra, and though the size is adjustable the maximum is only just large enough to cover Nori's front. The inability to protect from multiple angles is the real weak point.

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Name of Technique:
Sun Style: Heat
Type of Jutsu:
Ninjutsu
Rank:
B
Range:
Medium
Nature Type:
Solar
Handseals:
6
Description:
The air around Nori out to 50m is superheated over time. At first the temperature climb is barely noticeable, but rather quickly it starts to climb. Prolonged proximity can lead to being cooked alive. Though Nori is at the epicenter, he is unaffected by the temperature change. If kept up long enough, metals will even begin to melt.
Weakness:
Leaving the radius will allow survival, but the air is still going to be hot. To start reversing it, one has to make Nori stop performing the technique in some way. For starters, he cannot perform any other techniques while doing this and has to continuously put chakra into it to keep it going. So perhaps a good distraction would stop it.

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Name of Technique:
Sun Style: Gas
Type of Jutsu:
Ninjutsu
Rank:
A
Range:
Close-Medium
Nature Type:
Solar
Handseals:
6
Description:
From his mouth, Nori emits a cloud of orange gas. This chakra gas is pure radiation, and contact with it can lead to radiation poisoning. Prolonged contact makes the risk higher and the symptoms more severe. As well, the gas is quite hot so one will know when they're in it. Breathing it in also makes things significantly worse and guarantees radiation poisoning.
Weakness:
Avoid the cloud of gas at all cost. It is lighter than air, so it will eventually disperse and travel into the sky out of harms way. But until it is dissolved properly, it can be potentially lethal at minimal contact. Best counter is to just not touch it.

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Name of Technique:
Sun Style: Punch
Type of Jutsu:
Ninjutsu
Rank:
C
Range:
Close
Nature Type:
Solar
Handseals:
2
Description:
Nori envelops his hand with solar chakra and thrusts it forward. Though it is called a punch, it is actually an open palm strike. The chakra-boosted impact packs incredible concussive force. If it hits someone, they will be sent flying backwards. Though, the marvelous thing is that it does no actual harm to the target. It is eerily painless, too. The only damage can come from hitting something while being thrown away.
Weakness:
If dodged, the technique fails and the chakra is wasted. As well, since this does no damage, if one can avoid hitting the ground incorrectly or crashing into anything they will be just fine.

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Name of Technique:
Sun Style: Flare
Type of Jutsu:
Ninjutsu
Rank:
S
Range:
Very Long
Nature Type:
Solar
Handseals:
10
Description:
Using a massive amount of his solar chakra, Nori forms a large ball of pure solar chakra in front of him. Then, he expels it in the direction of his choice in the form of a powerful beam. This beam will tear through anything on its path, vaporizing everything in its way. And the range on it is ridiculous. The farther out it goes, the less powerful it becomes though it is always fatal. The power is important as the beam will continue until it hits something at least 1km away, to which it will explode and the technique will be finished. This is quite powerful and noisy, being very conspicuous and noticeable from a long ways away. Also not very practical in most combat situations, but is quite effective as a display of power.
Weakness:
There is a charge time of several seconds. Other than that, there are few weaknesses. The speed at which the beam goes makes dodging it nearly impossible (once it is fired, that is, as it can be dodged by simply not being in front of Nori's hands when he fires even though that isn't easy either). And any contact whatsoever will cause untimely death. Simply do not touch it. Otherwise, just attack while he charges it and is vulnerable.

Lunar

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Name of Technique:
Moon Style: Hide
Type of Jutsu:
Ninjutsu
Rank:
A
Range:
Close
Nature Type:
Lunar
Handseals:
6
Description:
Very similar to Hiding with Camouflage, only with a bit of a twist. While Nori is invisible, his chakra signature isn't hidden. However, he pumps chakra into the air around him like an invisible cloud. Though it highlights the general area around Nori to any sensors, it hides his exact position and makes pinpointing him impossible. As well, his natural stealth is further amplified by eliminating the sound of his footsteps.
Weakness:
While sensors may have a hard time detecting him by sight, sound, or chakra, there can always be little giveaways other than that. A rustle of leaves, footprints in mud, etc. And though he may be invisible, it does not make him immune to Genjutsu.

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Name of Technique:
Moon Style: Hidden Stars
Type of Jutsu:
Ninjutsu
Rank:
B
Range:
Medium
Nature Type:
Lunar
Handseals:
5
Description:
Nori infuses his projectile weapons with his lunar chakra, making them temporarily invisible. This makes them extra dangerous, especially if used on a bunch of shuriken all at once.
Weakness:
Any contact makes them turn visible again. Though they are impossible to see, they can be detected by other means such as sensing.

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Name of Technique:
Moon Style: Comet
Type of Jutsu:
Ninjutsu
Rank:
A
Range:
Medium
Nature Type:
Lunar
Handseals:
6
Description:
Nori forms a ball of lunar chakra in his hands, about the size of a baseball. He then throws it at his opponent. For the first few meters, it will fly at the speed of a shuriken. However, after that, it will suddenly pick up speed, becoming almost a blur. In fact, it looks like it grows a chakra tail giving it the appearance of a comet. While it flies, it makes a mesmerizing whooshing noise. However, once it contacts something, it explodes violently. This technique's main danger is the speed at which the comet flies, as it will fly far faster than any thrown weapon can go but the explosion itself is only large enough to kill with a direct hit.
Weakness:
Though it is very fast, it can still be dodged. And dodging pretty much guarantees living, though mutilation is still a possibility pending narrowness of dodge. The power of the technique does allow it to break through many defenses, but since it explodes upon contact it can be destroyed prematurely by a cleverly thrown shuriken or something of that general nature.

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Name of Technique:
Moon Style: Wall
Type of Jutsu:
Ninjutsu
Rank:
B
Range:
Self
Nature Type:
Lunar
Handseals:
8
Description:
A chakra cloak wraps around Nori, providing him with protection from Ninjutsu. Though it does nothing to protect from physical attacks, it blocks incoming chakra and thus neutralizes most incoming jutsu.
Weakness:
Taijutsu goes past the chakra, and if the Ninjutsu is powerful enough it can break through the chakra cloak.

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Name of Technique:
Moon Style: Falling Star
Type of Jutsu:
Taijutsu
Rank:
B
Range:
Close
Nature Type:
Lunar
Handseals:
0
Description:
A chakra boosted kick, more or less. Most commonly used on aerial opponents for maximum damage, as being spiked to the ground from this kick can typically incapacitate most foes. Yes, this kick hits pretty damn hard. Nori's leg will glow from the chakra before the attack, which is how it can be determined that he is using this technique.
Weakness:
No real weaknesses to this. It's a really, really powerful kick. My advice: just dodge, don't block.

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Name of Technique:
Moon Style: Disruption
Type of Jutsu:
Passive Effect
Rank:
N/A
Range:
Medium
Nature Type:
Lunar
Handseals:
N/A
Description:
A passive effect to Nori's Tenjin. Water flow of any kind is disrupted in his vicinity. This means that anyone attempting a water technique will have a hard time at first, as the water won't want to work the way they want it to. However, with a bit of trying, they can adjust to the new conditions and being operating their water techniques at full capacity.
Weakness:
A little trial and error will allow others to overcome the effect and use water techniques properly.

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Name of Technique:
Moon Style: Meteor Shower
Type of Jutsu:
Genjutsu
Rank:
B
Range:
Medium
Nature Type:
Lunar
Handseals:
6
Description:
A double effect Genjutsu activated by eye contact. The victim will feel the earth around them begin to quake, as if there is a powerful earthquake going on. As well, it will appear to them that Nori performed a shadow clone technique, as many copies of Nori will appear and will all attack at once. This technique is effective at distracting someone long enough for Nori to hit them with something else.
Weakness:
Missing the eye contact will avoid it. As well, it can be broken by typical methods of Genjutsu dispelling.

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Name of Technique:
Moon Style: Moon Cycle
Type of Jutsu:
Ninjutsu
Rank:
S
Range:
Self
Nature Type:
Lunar
Handseals:
10
Description:
This is a multi-stage technique, which is perfectly symmetrical up to the middle stage with each stage lasting approximately a minute. The first and last stages consist of Nori having a chakra cloak that enhances both his speed and his strength. The second and second to last stages add protection to his cloak, allowing him the ability to take more hits. As well, his speed and strength are further boosted. The third and third to last stages consist of this cloak adding even more protective value, being now able to take even very powerful hits, and his speed and strength are even further boosted. At this point, he can move faster than the untrained eye can detect and can knock someone into next week with one punch. The middle stage adds versatility to his cloak. It can now form appendages to lash out or grab other people or objects. His properties are not altered in any other way. From the middle on, the stages works as a sort of cooldown with Nori gradually losing the power he gained in equal timeframes.
Weakness:
This consumes a lot of his chakra, and he cannot perform any other techniques while doing this. There is no real weakness to the technique itself, but afterwards Nori is left somewhat vulnerable considering how much chakra he had to expend. For the duration, however, it is best to say that one should just focus on not dying rather than fighting.

Eclipse

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Name of Technique:
Eclipse Mode
Type of Jutsu:
Ninjutsu
Rank:
S
Range:
Self
Nature Type:
Solar + Lunar
Handseals:
N/A
Description:
With access to all his chakra, Nori now has access to incredible power in the form of Eclipse Mode. By tapping into both systems at the same time, Nori unleashes all his chakra. This forms a white chakra cloak around him of rather large size. It protects him from all forms of techniques, being virtually impenetrable. As well, his strength and his speed become unmatched, and he can even manipulate his cloak to form appendages and grasp objects. Nori basically becomes a god among men at this point.
Weakness:
This only lasts for the duration of an eclipse. Nori has to specifically tap into his systems, because this is not a passive effect of being in an eclipse. However, the real drawback to this is that using all that much power in such a short amount of time... It can do quite the damage to the body. In fact, just using this technique automatically guarantees hospitalization afterwards, and using it properly is... well... fatal to the user.

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CURRENT REVISION IN RPG, NEED TO UPDATE LATER

-peaks in-
im just going to mark this as my spot for once i finish up my jutsu lol
-vanishes in a puff of smoke-

-reappears in a puff of smoke-

Summoning jutsu! (cheesy but whatever XD)
i shall post in rpguild as well ^^


Name: Arashi Hayato
Nickname/Alias: The silent leech
Gender: male
Age and date of birth: 13, , ,02/01/461
Age Appearance: looks about 17/18
Sexuality: bi

Parents: Kina "Eta" Odayaka and Omashu "Eta" Ikari, Died of unknown cause
Length and build: about 6'6" and appears scrawny, but is actually very muscular.
Weight: 140lbs
Favorite weather and season: Arashi loves the gentle rains, and is particularly fond of the time between spring and summer where it rains in such a fashion



Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: (not entirely sure of what this is lol)

Clan/Bloodline: Eta

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature: Water/Lightning



Appearance:
(without the guns and hat, wears ninja bandana around neck)





Personality: Arashi is quiet and slow to anger, but fiercely protective of friends family and clan. When meeting new people, Arashi is generally shy and takes a bit to open up to them, but Once he does he becomes a loyal friend and will always come to aid when needed. Although slow to anger, Arashi went into an uncontrollable rage once when a friend was killed in front of him.



History: Arashi was born and raised in Kirigakure as part of the Eta clan. His parents died shortly after his third birthday under odd circumstances, although no one is sure just what killed them. When Arashio was five, and not as closed and reclusive as he is now. his best friend, Hirame, was killed in front of him during a sleepover that turned into a robbery. He and Hirame had been tortured with blades to try and get information on valuables in the house. When the boys couldn't help they killed Hirame as a lesson and left Arashi to die. Arashi had felt so helpless that he couldn't do anything that he vowed to become stronger and protect those he loves. During a medical examination shortly after the incident, it was discovered that he had a rare condition that made him feel pain at a lower level then most. so much so, that he almost did not feel pain at all. Once he reached the age of 9 and began training to become a ninja, he used this to his full advantage, training well beyond what others would have been able to due to pain or exhaustion and wearing weights hidden in his clothing at all times. One time when he was eleven, he even put himself into the hospital for a few days due to overworking his body to the point of fainting from exhaustion. Growing up he wasn't able to make many friends, and his shy and quiet nature didn't help. Nor the fact that he spent almost all of his time either training or painting. Arashi was determined to raise his skills to the point that he could protect his friends and family without fail. He also holds a deep hatred for the three men that killed his friend, their faces burned into his memory. If he ever would find them he knew they would not get away with what they had done..

Theme Song: Blackmill: Lucid Truth


Weapons/Items: Supīdo and Tsuyo-sa, AKA the twins
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Name of Weapon or Item: Supīdo (speed)

Description: a right handed iaijutsu blade, used along with Tsuyo-sa, the pair work together similar to duel-rapiers, and also as katanas.

Appearance: (see appearance)



Name of Weapon or Item: Tsuyo-sa (strength)

Description: a left handed iaijutsu blade, used along with Supīdo, the pair work together similar to duel-rapiers, and also as katanas.

Appearance: (see appearance)



Kunai x 10
Explosive seals x 7
Water bottle x 2
Medicinal herb x 8 (used to stanch wounds until medical assistance arrives or is received)
shuruken x 20
caltrops x 35
wire x 5 (5 foot length)
wire x 5 (2 foot length)
wire x 5 (1 foot length mainly used to tie seals to kunai)
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Skills/Abilities
(What are the skills that make your character good at some points or bad. Chakra control, reflexes and such are needed to be placed here.)

[GOOD]
*pretty good control of chakra, almost as if a second nature. can improve however
*Can move without the need of sight, due to exceptional hearing. also is a natural at hiding in mist technique.
*Very agile, can attack at amazing speeds with his swords. able to move faster then most in his class due to constant wearing of weighted clothing. also able to move quickly without being heard. (similar to Guy, but not as obvious. usually hidden in leggings, arm-guards, gloves, and weighted sandals.)

[BAD]
*Due to his lack of pain, Arashi tends to take more damage without realizing it, allowing enemies to take him down faster then most others. larger wounds can still cause a noticeable amount of pain however.
*If Arashi's blades are taken from him, his offensive ability drops considerably. most of his jutsus are defense related or stealth related.
*although duel natured in his elemental usage, he only knows one jutsu of the lightning element, and is slow to learn others.



Special Traits
*Somewhat higher pool of chakra, not extremely so, but enough to make a noticeable difference. (ex. normal pool of chakra would make a large fireball, and a high level would make a giant fireball, Arashi would be around the middle of the two).
*Extremely fast and agile (when not weighted, otherwise downgrades to 'very' [when compared to current class] )
*Rare condition almost makes him feel no pain.
*Is a user of Eta clan Kekkei Genkai.
*is not great at any particular class of jutsu, but has a decent grasp at each

Kekkei Genkai: Chi No Kiri (sometimes referred to as "Ryūketsu no Misuto")

Name of Kekkei Genkai: blood mist or "the bloody mist"
Clan: Eta
Description: Ninja from the Eta clan sometimes have a rare Kekkei Genkai that appears once every 3 generations in each family. Dubbed "the Bloody mist", Eta clan members that have this Kekkei Genkai have two unique abilities: The first Similar to the hiding in mist technique. Upon activating with the phrase "Ketsueki kizu" (blood wound) and a self inflicted wound, which can be anything from a slight cut to gash to a missing limb, the user produces a red mist that acts almost identically to hiding in mist. a small portion of the users blood creates the initial mist, which spreads according to the amount of chakra used.
The second ability is divided between the first ability and a stronger albeit drastically time restricted sign activated one.
While using Ketsueki kizu, the blood mist can consume the chakra of anyone within it except the user. it will not do this to others that the user does not wish to drain, but will effect others even if their presence is unknown. this adds to the chakra infused within the mist, allowing it to grow slightly faster. although a draining ability, it is slow enough to be unnoticeable to those affected by it (Ninja with very good chakra control can detect this rather easily, while ninja with large chakra pools are noticeably less able to detect the drain.)
The hand sign activated half is a more powerful version of the draining ability, able to take at most half of a persons chakra through direct physical contact within a few seconds of activation. The downside of this more powerful version is that it the chakra must be used within the next minute, as it disperses extremely quickly.

When an Eta clan member is first learning to use their abilities, the chi kizu spreads rather slowly upon it initial use even with good chakra control. the activated drain also can take at mose about 1/5 of a persons chakra. The activation sign is the Jin Seal (yang water).

Eta clan members seldom use their Kekkei Genkai unless there is a dire need.



Jutsu:
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Rank B (current goal)
Water Release: Water Formation Pillar
[Duel clarification! this is NOT a known jutsu, but Arashis current goal in mind]

Rank C (X2)
Water Prison Technique
Water Clone Technique

Rank D (X3)
Water Release: Black Rain Technique
Water Release: Water Shield
Water Release: Water Bullet Technique

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Custom Jutsu
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Name of Technique: Lightning release: Spark ball
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Range: Mid
Nature Type: lightning
Handseals: monkey
Description: Using a simple handseal, Arashi creates a small fist sized ball of sparks in his hand and throws it towards his opponent. It is not intended to actually damage the opponent, but distract them. its secondary purpose is to create sparks that can set fire the black rain technique. Arashi stumbled onto it when attempting to create a flame source to light the black rain technique.
Weakness: Does no real damage, but can cause a static like shock. Its slow enough that it can easily be sidestepped.

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(tba)
Name of Technique:
Type of Jutsu:
Rank:
Range:
Nature Type:
Handseals:
Description:
Weakness:

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Summons
[hider=Summoning(s)]
Name:
Species:
Age: (If applicable)
Size: (Small, medium, large, colossal. The size and strength dictate the chakra cost.)
Unique Traits: (Just like the one for you character. This can mean flight for birds, or swimming for fish.)
Jutsu:
History: (Optional)
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Read more: narutorotg.proboards.com/thread/46/cs-form-rpg#ixzz2vfh0QGtI

[Little Alice]

WIP!!

The world resolves around love,

You just need to find that love.

Name:
Kelly Isoki
Nickname/Alias:
Kelly-chan.
Gender:
Female
Age and date of birth:
18 years old, born on 25th of January.
Age Appearance:
Teen
Sexuality:
Heterosexual.

Parents:
Shorishi and Umi Isoki.
Length and build
1.64m and slim build.
Weight
56 kg.
Favorite weather and season
Summer and sunny weather.


Village:
None, travelling around with Lars.
Birthplace:
Sky Country.
Organization:
N/A

Clan/Bloodline:
N/A

Rank:
N/A

Chakra Nature:
N/A



Appearance:




Personality:

Kelly is a very cheerful girl. Its unusual to see her not smile or smirk while she goes about. There are some moments when she reveals that she thinks about something, usually showing no emotion as becoming silent as well. Towards others she is always polite and talks in many cases with a very friendly tone. Final, but not least, she shows also that she is a very passionate person as she tries to do things at her best, often becoming disappointed if it won't work out as planned.



History:
Kelly has grown up in a normal family in the capital of the Sky country. Attending to a normal school, she always had shown desire to travel around and see beautiful places that were outside the capital of the Sky country. The mountains of the Lightning Country. The lush forests of the Fire country and even wished to see the sea of sand in the Wind Country.

While she has always dreamed of doing this, it only became a reality when she met a boy she felt in love with. When Kelly met Lars, the two decided to share the dream of traveling together. Hearing it was a rather pleasant place, the two decided to head to the Sea country, wanting to go on a vacation there and taste some of the culture over there.

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